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The Red-Pen Desk

Three repairs that clinical writers make constantly and students are rarely taught to do well: defusing a dose that can be misread, deleting the fossils out of a copy-forwarded note, and correcting the record in a way the audit trail will back up. Work through all three tabs — each one is a different kind of damage.
Admission medication reconciliation, transcribed at 2140. Nine expressions on this sheet appear on the Joint Commission do-not-use list or the ISMP error-prone list. Click each one, see how it gets misread, and choose the safe form.
How it gets misread
Every one of these conventions exists because somebody died.
Autocomplete is not proofreading. Electronic prescribing removed handwriting errors and introduced selection errors — the drug one line above the one you wanted, the paediatric concentration, the default frequency you never changed. Read the finished order back to yourself as a full sentence: drug, dose, route, frequency, indication. Three seconds, and it catches the class of error the computer cannot.